Friday, May 29, 2026

When did I catch the book writing bug?

I have always dated my desire to be a published author to my years in seminary and parish ministry. I learned the power of language to create reality and the importance of storytelling to create meaning. The Bible is a book of stories and the purpose of those stories is to bring listeners to the truths revealed in them. Writing weekly sermons for six years was an exercise in meaning-making through stories that were intended to understand, shape, inspire, heal, motivate, empathize with, and be relatable to the lives of my listeners. During those years, I wrote two failed book manuscripts. I also started keeping a journal, something I have done for over fifty years.

Ten years later, after having changed my profession to psychotherapy, primarily marriage and family therapy, I co-authored my first book (1990). Six years after that, I co-authored another book (1996). It wasn't until nine years later that I published my first novel (2005), followed by nine more in the ensuing twenty years (number eleven will be released in a matter of months).

My book writing interests began in my mid-twenties and eventually led to long-fiction writing, something I never thought I would (or could) do, twenty-five years later. 

Recently, I read the obituary of a friend from my teen years. Curiosity led me to my old high school year books. I found her kind words written in the back of my Junior year book (1967). I was surprised by her PSS. She said, "Don't forget to write the book!"  I don't recall what she was referring to, but I was surprised that even at age sixteen I aspired to do something that would shape the next sixty years. 

Makes me wonder whether the seed was planted even earlier than this. 

Saturday, May 23, 2026

Slogging

When I sit down to write, I begin by rereading what I've written the last few days. I edit those pages before I go on. When I'm satisfied, I start the day's work. It's like a pitcher needing to wind up before throwing the ball. 

Other times I can write for several days without rereading anything. This can happen any time during the months it takes to complete a novel, but it happens most often in the first 10,000 or so words. I'm not sure why I do this. But that's where I've been this week. 

Sometimes I feel a little bit like Sisyphus. Slogging along. Hm...  

Friday, May 22, 2026

"Pantser"

 Among the many quotes about writing that I admire, one stands out for me. When asked about how he writes, the novelist E.L. Doctorow said:

"Writing a novel is like driving a car at night. You can see only as far as your headlights, but you can make the whole trip that way" 

He is a "pantser", which is to say someone who writes by the seat of his or her pants. There is no outline to follow or map that shows every twist and turn of the story. A pantser writes into the story, trusting that he or she will see far enough ahead to keep going, to discover, to be surprised, to follow the characters where they may lead. 

I am a card carrying panster! When I start writing a novel, I usually have the title and a main character (although that main character may be replaced by a yet unknown character). I also have a notion or an inkling about challenging circumstance that character may face. Other characters emerge, often quickly, though some don't make it onto the page until I am well into the story.

Writing this way is a little bit crazy. It takes a lot of trust in the process, a willingness to let the story emerge out of the dark road ahead. 


Thursday, May 21, 2026

Complexity

I'm writing what I hope will be another novel. I have been working on a single thread, which is to say, I am writing from one character's perspective. But yesterday, I started writing from a second character's point of view and I have another in mind and a few more to consider down the line. Multiple view points create more complexity and more complexity creates a greater variety of options from which new ideas emerge. Then I can do a better job of weaving all the threads together. 

The Rudder

 Before I start writing a story, I (almost) always have a title in mind. The title acts as a rudder. It guides the story, taking it where it needs to go. It's not that I think about the title while I write, but rather that the title inspires or permeates the writing without my having to keep it in mind all the time. I guess my unconscious mind must take care of that. The piece I am working on now doesn't have a title. Ugh.

Writing Through Uncertainty

I am no longer (as) bothered by not knowing where exactly I am going when I write. The uncertainty, even the long periods of screen-staring, don’t make me as anxious anymore. I have confidence that if I sit long enough, words will find their way through my fingers and onto the screen. I have come to value the not-knowing element of writing because that’s where serendipity happens; that’s where new things are born, often looking very different than what I had originally imagined.

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Wednesday, May 20, 2026

scribbles...

scribbles...

I have never written a personal blog before, but my new publisher has encouraged me to start one. At first I was hesitant. I said to my self, I said, Dave, when was the last time you said something important, valuable, coherent, compelling, uh, even really good. When I realized I couldn't answer this question, I decided it was time to write a blog....about writing and other stuff.

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Polishing

The last thing I do with a manuscript is polish it, which means rereading it to remove excess words, take out as many "coulds" and woulds" that I can. Also 'ing' words. Check sentences for passive voice. Find any sentence that doesn't sound right and change it. I do this at least three times, sometimes more. I could do it for the next year and I'd still find things to change or improve.

Yesterday, I finished polishing LAST ALIVE. I'll submit it to my editor on June 1.

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Monday, May 18, 2026

In search of the perfect sentence

       I am working on something new, and, as you will see, I was very productive today.   

Originally, this sentence was:

Driving down Lawrence Ave she wondered if a second time trying to meet her father was wise.

After careful analysis, I decided to go a different direction:

Driving down Lawrence Ave she wondered if trying to meet her father a second time was wise.

So close and yet so far. Then it came to me:

Driving down Lawrence Ave she wondered if trying again to meet her father was wise.

My God, it was still wrong!

Driving down Lawrence Ave she wondered if trying to meet her father again was wise.

Within inches of perfection!

Now I'm going to take a nap.


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Wednesday, May 13, 2026

Hummingbird

     Yesterday, the hummingbirds returned. Well, at least one hummingbird. It's one of our favorite signs of spring. Each year I wait and wonder and then worry that they may not return. My doubt turns into confidence, much like my writing. Sometimes, I wait and worry about where a story is heading. Then my confidence returns, even though it may not arrive until I am two thirds through the story.   

Tuesday, May 12, 2026

What am I doing?

      I had decided months ago that my upcoming novel would be my last. Twenty-six years writing long fiction and eleven novels published seemed quite enough. My thinking is less sharp. New ideas allude me. Crisp words don't come. Last month, though, I started playing with a short story to see if it could evolve into something longer.  But I needed a brief set-up scene to launch the first chapter. I started working on that one scene, but it is evolving into a story of its own. Not sure where this bit of scribbling will take me.

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Polishing

     This morning I was polishing my latest novel---Last Alive---which is due to my publisher in a few weeks. Tracking down every "would" and every "ing" word. This seems simple: "I am starting to write a book" should be "I started writing a book." Fewer words are (almost) always better. Of course, a nice long sentence can change the pace or balance a string of shorter sentences. Anyway, that's what I'm working on today.

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